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Post by Gus on May 6, 2005 13:56:39 GMT -5
Um, for instance, the Team Ren pic had a lot of "dead space." Meaning, pointless background for no reason, while the focus should be on the figures. Also, your Gaara-team pic, Temari is sorta cut off, it looks lazy, like you started to draw her, realized she wasnt going to fit, but kept drawing her in that spot. It sorta made it ackward. You really do have tons of potential, if those pics were developed properly, they could be amazing works. YEah, yer right. Thanks for the advice! By the way, I couldn't help the whole Temari thing. My eraser broke. |
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Post by Gus on Dec 14, 2005 16:34:31 GMT -5
Oh Em Gee. I'm actually posting shit. >_> ...uh. Drew this a while ago... saw it with my stuff while I was scanning other things, thought I might show it here... ...uh... i5.photobucket.com/albums/y198/Gus71791/HAONA1.jpghm. It's *supposed to be* Hao. Uh... his ears are positioned all weird, and I kinda f**ked up on his gloves... ...and his hands... ...and he has no nose, as I noticed while scanning... >_>;; ...........eh, whatever. Comment? =D |
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Post by wannabeeliza on Dec 14, 2005 16:43:04 GMT -5
(If you save it as file type jpg it doesnt re-size...photobucket never resizes jpg also keeping image size no bigger than 600X600 helps but anyway...)
you have a unique style keep up the good work
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Post by Gus on Dec 14, 2005 16:58:49 GMT -5
o_0
...uh, it's not... resized...
.....but, thanks anyways? o.0
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Post by TakinawaTonfa on Dec 14, 2005 17:13:38 GMT -5
Dude, the pipe makes him a badass instantly!
Although the hand thats holding does looked a little f**ked up like you said.
Not bad at all though.
"I'm so badass, I don't even need a nose!"
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Post by wannabeeliza on Dec 14, 2005 17:37:09 GMT -5
o_0 ...uh, it's not... resized... .....but, thanks anyways? o.0 I know but you had a problem with it and for some reason a few others do too but I can never tell them for one reason or another i just wanted to get it out of my system XD But anyway like I said its a unique style it'd be good for a comic |
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Post by resurie on Dec 15, 2005 14:33:51 GMT -5
Very cool, I must say. I like your style, it's... sketchy. XD *loves sketchy*
The only criticism I got for you is the hand, which you have already stated. And the arms look kind of short to me, but that could just be me.
I really like his outfit. XD *gives you cookies*
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Post by Gus on Dec 15, 2005 15:13:47 GMT -5
Indeed. I like, died on that hand.... and then realized I was using a pen, and died a little more...
yah. Those damn gloves really do make the arms look short, the way they go all wide... and some of that was that they really did come out kinda short, too... >_>;;
....fear mah sketchiness. >D
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niji
Cute Newbie
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Post by niji on Dec 15, 2005 15:47:22 GMT -5
That Hao pic is quite awesome indeed. And your style is to love.
I like the feathers. They're nice. XD
Yah, the ear should be a bit more.. to the back. And the arm not holding the pipe looks somewhat short..
Whatever that arm's holding.. I wanna steal it so bad. Dx
ah, I tried to open the older pics, but the links seem to be broken... >.>
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MetaKnight
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Post by MetaKnight on Dec 16, 2005 12:19:58 GMT -5
Hm.. don't reember ever commenting on Gus' work... but if I didn't then I like your style. I especially liked the one where you drew Team Yoh as a band.
If I did comment on your art before... then keep up the good work anyway.
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