Renluver
Shaman in Training
To look at the same thing as everyone else, but to think something completely different.
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Post by Renluver on Mar 21, 2005 22:34:57 GMT -5
If only I could write like that, I mean I do write poems, but not as good as that *sigh* I LUV YOUR POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! especially the first one
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Post by taoren33 on Mar 22, 2005 17:03:45 GMT -5
Departed Soul
Is this a dream? More like a nightmare. This twisted vision Warped In which Everyone has turned away Turned their backs on me I drove them to it It matters little The insignificance of others All but you You have always been here I thought you Always Would be My follower Like some damn lackey No more My senses deadened Without you A gaping absence Of myself What have I lost? Everything worth living for Worth fighting for Worth dying for. Now you’re gone. I cannot snatch you Back Cannot have things As they were Before you left me Before I drove you to it All I have are Flickering memories Shadows of what once was What I had What could have been What I could have had What I lost In this empty solitude I strain to hear your voice An echo of what I wasted away Striving to See your face Once more Absorbed by this wrenching Loneliness What I relinquished When I disregarded your Existence What I lost When I scorned you ceaselessly Did I expect you To stay? After everything I did to you, Every reason I gave you to leave me, Did I really believe you would remain? Yes. What did I lose? The opportunity To pursue my devotion For you. This harsh reality Offers no comfort What I took for granted You Are gone. This is the Unavoidable truth, And it hurts.
-Tao Ren
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