SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
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Post by SamLynn on Jan 31, 2005 8:02:47 GMT -5
The first completed Shaman King Fic my co-author and I have ever written! "Soul Unity: Living for the Moment" www.fanfiction.net/s/2242568/1/"Anna and Yoh are 19 years old and heading back to Izumo to finally get married! But things may not be as perfect as they seem within the group. Rated for language, and adult situations in later chapters." I would really appreciate any reveiws you guys could spare - proper feedback is always appreciated! Thanks! ~Sam~ |
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Hana
Senior Shaman
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Post by Hana on Feb 10, 2005 18:39:25 GMT -5
eh...i dont have an ff account, so ill just leave my thoughts here, k? ^-^
well, it's obvious that you worked really hard this, putting lots of time and effort into the story. It's nicely fleshed out, and I think if it was turned into episodes, it would take at least two. It's pretty good, situations and relationships are quite realistic, especially with the improvisation on the less developed adults like Kino and Keiko.
ano... where's Hana??
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SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
Posts: 101
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Post by SamLynn on Feb 10, 2005 20:48:24 GMT -5
Thank you so much for your comments! They're very thoughtful!
And I'm sorry, but in our SK universe Hana doesn't exist. Sorry - but in our stories Yoh and Anna don't have kids until they're 21. And they have 8 kids in total - I really think that Anna and Yoh would be baby-making-machines! ^_^
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Hana
Senior Shaman
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Post by Hana on Feb 11, 2005 18:52:16 GMT -5
*twitch* ^^;...doesnt...exist....T-T
lol, it's k.
*is jealous of Yona's eight kids*
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YohhoY
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Post by YohhoY on Feb 13, 2005 12:12:58 GMT -5
 Wowie. That's a really great fanfic. I didn't get a chance to read all of it but, from what I did go over, it was pretty realistic. Although Anna seems a wee bit too nice... ;D Good Job!
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SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
Posts: 101
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Post by SamLynn on Feb 13, 2005 18:06:59 GMT -5
Heh heh, well we figure Anna would mellow out a bit after all those years of being around Yoh's good influence.
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SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
Posts: 101
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Post by SamLynn on Feb 13, 2005 18:36:24 GMT -5
By the way - Chapter 2 is up now!!
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Post by mllamble on Feb 13, 2005 20:45:41 GMT -5
I read some of this book. Very good work! I'm glad to see that Tammy isn't all worked up about Yoh's marriage (well, not like she might have been).
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SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
Posts: 101
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Post by SamLynn on Feb 13, 2005 20:47:30 GMT -5
Tami's heart belongs to Ren now. ^_^
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Post by RyuLover67 on Feb 13, 2005 21:05:02 GMT -5
Yeah it's really great and I have it on my favs on ff.net so yeah.You say ch.2 is up?*goes read because it's really great and funny*
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SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
Posts: 101
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Post by SamLynn on Feb 13, 2005 22:20:09 GMT -5
I'm so glad you like it! And I'm thrilled to know the story merits a fav!
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Post by mllamble on Feb 16, 2005 15:48:26 GMT -5
Again, I like it. When does page 3 come out?
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SamLynn
Full Fledged Shaman
Yoh x Anna Forever!
Posts: 101
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Post by SamLynn on Feb 16, 2005 17:09:40 GMT -5
Probably in about a week. Glad you're enjoying it!
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Post by mithos on Feb 16, 2005 17:13:30 GMT -5
neat! ;D
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Post by RyuLover67 on Mar 9, 2005 21:14:03 GMT -5
Yea! There's another chapter up! I gotta read chapter 4...*reads it*
Edit:What a great ending.I loved this story!
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Wowie. That's a really great fanfic. I didn't get a chance to read all of it but, from what I did go over, it was pretty realistic. Although Anna seems a wee bit too nice... ;D
