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Post by RyuLover67 on Mar 5, 2005 7:53:02 GMT -5
Nippon, could you please put in Hao? I'd love to see his reaction to "Zeke."
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Post by Secretofmana on Mar 5, 2005 17:40:22 GMT -5
I'm another big fan of this Fan Fic. It's hilarious! Keep up the good work and good luck on the Hao/Zeke portion!
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Yari
Cute Newbie
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Post by Yari on Mar 5, 2005 21:55:49 GMT -5
Great story NIPPION! I really enjoyed your story
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Post by animeninjaNIPPON on Mar 8, 2005 19:08:49 GMT -5
Journey to America: As Told by HoroHoro
(part ten) by animeninjaNIPPON I was devastated. It was bad enough that I had to resume that horrid pseudonym, but now everyone in America would know ne by that name. Ryu, Ren, and I tried to reason with the suits, to no avail.
"Please!" Ryu cried. "Please let us keep our names!"
Ren was too proud to beg, but he found another way to get the point across.
"Now see here," he yelled, "I'll only answer to Tao Ren, or possibly Tao Len. None of this 'Lenny' crap." He pointed his weapon at the exec in warning, and in turn was forcibly calmed by two heavily-muscled suits. He managed to struggle out of their grasp, but kept silent after that.
I glanced over at Faust, who was unusually quiet considering the scenario. Then again, he didn't have to suffer a name change. Yoh stood to his right, as calm as ever. Next to him were Ponchi and Conchi, and I could hear Ponchi muttering about how he'd better be on a card if he was to endure the neutering.
"It'd better be a really powerful card, too," he continued. Suddenly, an ominous shadow loomed over him. I glanced up and nearly panicked, for there stood Hao Asakura.
"Zeke," said one exec casually. "Glad you could make it." Hao just stood there as his spirit ally, the Spirit of Fire, loomed over everyone.
"Zeke, are you ready?" another exec asked. "We're going alphabetically, and it's your turn for the photo shoot." Hao still wouldn't respond.
Hao turned around and glared at them. If looks could kill, those suits would have died twice. "You know how to address me," he replied menacingly.
Before either suit could utter so much as the predictable "Master Zeke," Hao rose to attack. Not wishing to witness such a horrible manslaughter, yet not wanting to risk my life in what was most likely a vain attempt to stop the inevitable, I turned away and dove for cover. I could feel heat against my back, and I knew I'd be hearing screams soon. But after 15 minutes, the flames died down, and the execs stood tall (although badly singed).
"Yes, Master Hao!" they sang in unity, then scrambled away.
"And that takes care of business," Hao said, then turned away with SoF.
"What was that?" Ryu asked.
"What happened?" Tokagero asked.
"Why aren't they dead?" Ren inquired.
The conversation went on like that all day. Most of us had come to the conclusion that Hao had a private meeting with the two suits. But no one knew exactly what was said.
well, there's Hao... he'll be back in future chapters, of course. enjoy  |
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DarkShaman
Full Fledged Shaman
Is there truly a place where are all belong?
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Post by DarkShaman on Mar 8, 2005 19:16:07 GMT -5
great part! Can't believe i forgot to read the other part... ahh i'm skipping.. kill me... I'll go back to read it thou
anyways great update
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Post by Secretofmana on Mar 8, 2005 19:23:43 GMT -5
YAY!!!!!! You finally continued!!! Great job! But Hao still has his name as Zeke on the card! How are you going to explain that?
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Post by Bluehairedhorofreak on Mar 8, 2005 19:28:54 GMT -5
Whoot! ^___^ Updates! Ish awesome!!!!! ^_____^
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Hana
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Post by Hana on Mar 8, 2005 19:36:50 GMT -5
mwahahaha!!! hao will be back!! XD I like that! Great update, as usual.
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Post by Pinkechidna on Mar 9, 2005 19:47:52 GMT -5
Hooray for Hao!
Ooh, mysterious conversation....I can't wait for the next chappy!
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synsan
Shaman in Training
<3
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Post by synsan on Mar 11, 2005 19:25:32 GMT -5
I don't think I've had this much fun reading a fanfic in ages!
I like the idea of having the story told from HoroHoro's perspective, and everyone is so beautifully in character!
Excellent writing animeninjaNIPPON! I can't wait for the next chapter! ;D
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TheRogue
Senior Shaman
NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
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Post by TheRogue on Mar 12, 2005 12:57:36 GMT -5
yey!! This fanfic was awsome!!! I didn`t even know the name-changing subject could be so much fun.
Keep up the good work!!
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OsirisOmega
Cute Newbie
The darkness will engulf you.
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Post by OsirisOmega on Mar 12, 2005 23:27:52 GMT -5
Lol! This is absolutely awesome!
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Mystic
Senior Shaman
Save the Earth! It's the only planet on which there is chocolate! :P
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Post by Mystic on Mar 13, 2005 15:51:25 GMT -5
Keep it going!! *goes back to finish chapter 10*
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Kyo
Shaman in Training
"I cut down anyone that gets in my way!"
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Post by Kyo on Mar 15, 2005 18:12:33 GMT -5
*claps until hands become bloody and falls off* another great chapter. GJ!!!
btw, how bout this for an idea: Tokyopop wants to take over Shonen Jump. Anime vs Anime.
ps: that was just a random idea
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Renluver
Shaman in Training
To look at the same thing as everyone else, but to think something completely different.
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Post by Renluver on Mar 15, 2005 22:53:46 GMT -5
lol! It was sooooo funny!!!!!!! *goes back to read it again*
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Hai guyz.
