Kyo
Shaman in Training
"I cut down anyone that gets in my way!"
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Post by Kyo on Apr 6, 2005 16:42:43 GMT -5
ROFL LOL LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'd love to see what would happen if other manga companies like tokyopop attacked viz to kidnap thier ppl.
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Ankari
Senior Shaman
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Post by Ankari on Apr 7, 2005 14:58:46 GMT -5
._. Did you just kill off Pirika? thats like not right. =shudders as she remebers who she RPs as on another sight=
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Post by animeninjaNIPPON on Apr 7, 2005 15:42:52 GMT -5
._. Did you just kill off Pirika? thats like not right. =shudders as she remebers who she RPs as on another sight= don't worry, she's not dead. but she is up to something... but I won't reveal too much. |
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Post by Throes on Apr 7, 2005 15:44:56 GMT -5
This is so great, I'm drawing a comic to go along with the story now! Because I don't have any other ideas...
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TheRogue
Senior Shaman
NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
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Post by TheRogue on Apr 9, 2005 12:35:56 GMT -5
*eats and sleeps next to the computer waiting for the next chapter*
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 11, 2005 5:55:58 GMT -5
TEXTYour story is amazing!I loved it!Keep up the good job cause it's worthed!
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Post by animeninjaNIPPON on Apr 19, 2005 17:08:39 GMT -5
Journey To America: As Told by HoroHoro
(part fourteen) By animeninjaNIPPON “Pirika! Come back!” I ran down the corridor, calling for my sister. She had given our group the wrong mail by mistake, and it had caused quite a commotion. I had to inform her, but I couldn’t find her.
The incessant laughter behind me finally faded into oblivion, whether from distance or loss of interest I could not tell. I glanced around the hall. All of the doors were closed, and I was sure that she wasn’t behind any of them – they were mostly janitor’s closets and restrooms. I came to the end of the corridor and turned at an angle. There before me lay a new, longer corridor. I sighed.
Suddenly, Kororo came to my attention. I looked down the new corridor and followed her to a door marked “Mail Room.” It was slightly open.
As I debated whether to peek inside, I could hear footsteps shuffling behind me. My heart began pounding, and my sweaty palms prevented me from properly gripping the doorknob. I opened the door a little wider, making it go creeeek…
Adrenaline flowed through my veins like new blood, and I was ready to fight if faced with a challenge. I threw the door open. I gasped.
“Pirika?”
“HoroHoro…” she was shocked. “I – I – “
“Are you stealing mail?”
“It’s hate-mail that Viz throws out.” She pulled some of the nicked letters out of her bag. “Ponchi and Conchi broke into here and Tamao gave me the letters they took. I was supposed to put them back, but I read them and thought you guys should know what the outside world is saying about Viz… and what they’re secretly doing to us.” She handed the letters to me.
I gave the letters back to her. “Do you realize the trouble you could get into for doing this?” I stepped into the mail room, closer to her. “Look, last night I found something out. Something terrible.”
Pirika looked at me with wide, sad eyes. “What is it?”
I cleared my throat. “Hao has seized control of 4Kids. And I have a feeling he’s starting to influence Viz also.”
“What do you – “Pirika’s inquiry was cut short by a loud crashing sound in the room parallel to the mail room. We dove into a nearby mail cart.
My heart was racing faster than ever now. The adrenaline pumped through me so hard that I wanted to jump out of the mail cart yelling, “Come arrest me!”
Over the beating of my terrified heart, I could have sworn I heard muffled voices. I was sure the execs were on to us, and searching for us in the very room we were in. Suddenly, I couldn’t breathe. I just had to bring my head to the surface. I burst out of the cart with Kororo, and Pirika came out two seconds later.
Somebody’s foot came crashing through the back wall. Pirika and I screamed a deadening scream. A tall blond man in a black suit and blue pinstriped shirt emerged from the wreckage, bruised and bloody. He lit up a cigarette. Behind him walked an equally battered Faust VIII, his spirit ally (and wife) Eliza, three X-Laws, and Chocolove, whom I had not seen since I arrived in America.
“Hao dies today,” one of the X-Laws swore.End of part fourteen
I've actually finished this story, but I need to type it up. I've worked on this fic for so long, and it brought me to tears to see it end...*sniff* anyhoo, enjoy. |
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Ankari
Senior Shaman
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Post by Ankari on Apr 19, 2005 17:25:13 GMT -5
o.o! Yay! Action in a fic thats not love inducsed!=glomp=
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Post by animeninjaNIPPON on Apr 21, 2005 17:25:13 GMT -5
Journey To America: As Told by HoroHoro
(part fifteen) by animeninjaNIPPON “OK, this is weird.” Pirika managed to sum it all up in one sentence.
I glanced at Faust. He smiled and waved. I moved closer to him. He shifted uncomfortably and stared at me as though I had spinach in my teeth. “Is something wrong?” he asked, still staring at me.
“Hao told me you’d been killed,” I replied.
“I haven’t seen Hao since before I left Japan,” Faust mused. “What would I know about whether he’s alive or dead?”
It suddenly occurred to me that Hao might have been screwing with my mind. But the look in his eyes was so serious…
“Where is this ‘Hao’ guy?” the man with the cigarette asked, blowing smoke.
“I don’t know,” I answered. “I saw him last night, then he disappeared. He could be halfway around the world by now.”
“Don’t count on it,” Chocolove said. “He’s probably right here, in the Viz building…”
“I can tell you where Hao is,” came an unknown voice behind me. Everybody turned around. Much to my surprise, it was Lyserg, standing next to Marco.
“Lyserg?” I exclaimed. “How’d you get here?”
“We’ve been at 4Kids this whole time,” Marco explained. “We weren’t needed at Viz until yesterday. Then we were put in jail.”
“Can you tell us where Hao is?” I asked.
“He’s at 4Kids HQ right now,” Lyserg answered, “but he’ll be back tomorrow morning, I think.”
“Until then,” the man with the cigarette said, “I’m gonna go deal with that crap-Viz company.”
“Not so fast, Sanji,” Chocolove said. “They don’t’ know that we’ve broken loose.”
“We should probably lay low for a while,” Faust added.
“Well, where are we gonna hide?” Lyserg asked.
“It doesn’t matter,” Pirika said, “just get out of here, quick!” The end of her sentence was perfectly timed to the beginning of footsteps walking down the hall…
“The Viz execs!” one of the X-Laws exclaimed.
“We don’t have time!” another one panicked.
The sound of footsteps grew louder. They couldn’t go back in the cell without being noticed through that huge hole in the wall, and there was no room to run.
“Quick! Close the door and they might not notice us!” I whispered, and Pirika closed the mail-room door. The footsteps died out. I sighed with relief. Unfortunately, someone began to turn the doorknob from the outside.
Marco threw himself against the door to barricade it, followed by Sanji and Faust. “Get out of here, guys!” the latter ordered.
“No,” I replied, “I’ll stay and fight.”
“Then I’ll stay too,” Pirika announced.
“No, it’s too dangerous!” I disagreed.
“HoroHoro,” Marco said to me, “take the others and run!”
The three blonds were struggling to keep the door closed, and there was no time to argue. “All right,” I reluctantly agreed.
It was fight or flight time. The three at the door would fight; the rest would flee. I led the others through the hole in the wall, only to find the other side blocked by iron bars. There was only one thing to do.
“Kororo, spirit ball mode, into the snowboard!” I cried. Now I had my oversoul, so I could break the bars. “Kaukau Priwenpe!”
SIDE NOTE: “Kaukau Priwenpe” is Ainu for “Renegade Hail.” |
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Post by RyuLover67 on Apr 21, 2005 18:41:11 GMT -5
This is getting so good.Don't stop writing it! It's really good! XD
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Post by animeninjaNIPPON on Apr 26, 2005 17:43:18 GMT -5
Journey to America: As Told by HoroHoro
(part sixteen) by animeninjaNIPPON Chunks of ice scattered everywhere, cutting through solid iron bars. “Lets go!” I called out to the others.
We scrambled to the door across the room. As Lyserg unlocked it, we could here a loud crash in the room, followed by some attacks. I worried about Faust and the others, but I had to get the group of refugees to safety. When we made it into the hall, we met up with a lone executive, whom Lyserg knocked out with his dowsing pendulum (oversouled with his spirit ally, Morphine).
“Now what?” Pirika asked.
“I’ll take it from here,” offered Chocolove, now fused with his spirit ally, Mic. “You and your sister gotta find Hao.”
“OK,” I said. “Pirika, let’s go!”
Pirika and I took off running as Chocolove and Lyserg agreed to split up the refugees and hide in the restrooms. We managed to find our way back to the cafeteria, but by the time we got there it was empty. As we headed back to join the others in our room, Yoh met up with us.
“Where have you been?” he asked, looking confused.
“It’s a long story,” I replied.
“We should discuss this later, Lord Yoh,” Amidamaru suggested. “It’s time to go to the 4Kids HQ.”
So we went to gather the other group members and go to4Kids. I was afraid that by this time, the suits had gotten word of what Pirika and I did, but fortunately none of them said anything to me. When we arrived at 4Kids, I caught a glimpse of a clone masquerading as the one they called Sanji. He looked the part physically, but his voice was way off base – and I could have sworn he was eating a lollipop. I didn’t have time to study him, though, as I was quickly led away to the filming room.
“I don’t want any trouble from you,” one of the execs sneered at me as I entered the room. At first I thought he meant the fiasco back at Viz, but then I realized he was referring to that certain taboo word I ad-libbed a few episodes back. I nodded silently to him in agreement as I took my place on the set.
“All right,” called the director, “lights, camera – “
“Hold it.” Hao stepped into the room, followed by SoF.
“M-Master Zeke!” the cameraman stuttered.
Hao glared over at me, then glared back at the cameraman. “I’ve warned you not to call me that.”
“Master Hao,” the cameraman corrected himself. “ What brings you here so early?”
“I have business with Trey Racer and his sister, Pilika.” I winced upon hearing my pathetic pseudonym. Hao turned to me, motioning for me to come forward, then gestured to Pirika. I figured he knew what happened, so naturally, I became tense. Pirika and I followed Hao out of the filming room, down the hall, and into another room marked by a large, blank sign.
“I know what you did,” Hao said, closing the door behind us, “and I’m not pleased.”
“You lied to me,” I dared to fire back. “You told me Faust VIII was dead.”
“He is,” Hao replied.
“I saw him though. And Marco, and Sanji, and Chocolove, and others. They aren’t dead; they were incarcerated.”
Hao’s eyes widened. “You must have been fooled by the clones. I saw them die. I know they were killed.”
Suddenly, it struck me. “How do you know it wasn’t the clones who were killed?”
ah, the anticipation rises... questions? comm...aww, you know. enjoy  |
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Post by Throes on Apr 26, 2005 17:49:37 GMT -5
This is getting really really really good, however, sadly I sense an end coming soon.
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Post by Secretofmana on Apr 27, 2005 5:42:48 GMT -5
Yeah....It's such a good story, too!From humorous to serious. And I can sense an "Ice vs. Fire" fight coming up. The end is approching fast....
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Kyo
Shaman in Training
"I cut down anyone that gets in my way!"
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Post by Kyo on Apr 27, 2005 17:00:37 GMT -5
WOOT!
this is gonna get goood.
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Post by Bluehairedhorofreak on Apr 27, 2005 21:35:04 GMT -5
. And I can sense an "Ice vs. Fire" fight coming up. If it were Ice vs Fire then Horo would definatly win. Even if Hao melts the ice, it becomes water! MWUAHAHAHA!! *cough* I'm done now. |
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Hai guyz.
