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Post by Sayoky on May 10, 2005 11:40:30 GMT -5
So...before you read this,I have to ask you to sit down!Okay,okay!I know I may sound crazy and dark....but...welll....ummm..Oh what the heck!Here it goes!!
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It was a hot day of summer.The bus was choky and everybody seemed to be asleep.
"Are we there yet?"asked HoroHoro impaciently
"Almost there" answered dully the old bus driver
"Aww come on!That's what you said two hours ago!"
Suddently the bus stopped.Everybody seemed to have woken up all of a sudden.
"So...are we there yet?"asked Yoh in a cheesy voice
"I'm sorry young man but the bus seemes to have broken down"
"WHAT?" everybody asked in a shoked voice
"You will all have to go outside for a whilt until I finish repairing the bus"
The all grabbed their bags and in line,they stepped outside the bus.
"Where are we anyway?"asked Ren
"I have absolutely no ideea!"answered Lyserg
"So,what now?I'm hungry..I think I'll go and eat something" said Yoh in a bored voice
"Suit yourself.Me and the boys are going for a small walk in th woods,aren't we?"said Anna from behind the group.
They just could't refuse her...the would have payed for it later on.
Ren,HoroHoro,Lyserg,Ryu,Faust,Manta and Anna headed twoards the dark forest.It didn't take long till they her a yell:"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"
They all turned thair heads to see what was happening....
That's all for now! :-XI'll let you bite your fingernails or toenails till the next part of it!
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Eliza
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Post by Eliza on May 17, 2005 14:53:58 GMT -5
YAY!!!!!! Faust and Manta are in it! Please continue!!! Please Sayoky-kun? *chibi eyes*
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Post by Sayoky on May 18, 2005 7:19:16 GMT -5
Awww...thanks Eliza!I'll delihgt you with my next part of the story. *** "NOOOO!!!"..Yoh was yelling.The group turned back to see what was happening but until they knew it,somebody threw a can of gas twoards them....smoke was everywhere...everybody caughed...soon they were all on the ground,unconcious. Now the true horror stars. Hours later they all woke up in a cave somwhere up the mounatins as they susspected.Their hands were tied up strongly and so were their feet. "Is everybody all right?"asked Yoh "Yes...that's not a problem...we have to get out of here but this ropes are too tight"said Faust. "Let's get us untied,shall we?"Ren spoke in a nervous voice Lyserg called his guardian spirit,Morphine,and they were all untied within seconds. "We have to find a way to get out of this creepy cave!"exclaimed Manta in a scared voice.He sounded more like a pidgeon. "Are you going to be scared all day long you little dwarf because if you are i'm going to tie you and leave you here!"Anna groaned at Manta. "No mam'!"he answered like a servant. Everybody got up and walked twoards the exit of the cave...but then,out of the blue,they heard a voice behind them: "Leaving so soon?" Who can it be?Stay tuned and find out more.....  |
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Eliza
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Post by Eliza on May 18, 2005 21:40:58 GMT -5
YAy! Very short, but I must read more...  *zombie like expressions* please? |
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Post by Sayoky on May 20, 2005 7:02:54 GMT -5
"Leaving so soon",repeated the voice,"the party has just started"..........*evil laughter* It was yhe one...the only one who created pain and disaster...it was Hao. "You evil...."Yoh lost his temper and wanted to attak Hao but soon he found himself on the cold stone floor of the dark cave. "What do you want?"Asked Anna nervously "What do I want??Hmmm.....I WANT TO KILL YOU ALL!!!!" Everybody got shocked hearing this and the way Hao laughed could have frozen their blood. "But first I'm going to have fun with you..." After saying that,Hao disappeared and left his hostages confused and shocked. "Are you okay Yoh?" asked Ren "I'm fine...let's get out of here before something else happens" "Errr...maybe we should stay here"squeled Manta in a girlish voice. Anna lost her temper: "YOU LITTLE ANNOYING DWARF!!!ARE YOU COMMING WITH US OR NOT?" "Yeessssssss Mam'!" "Take it easy Anna"Ryu dared to speak.... To his surprise Anna calmed down.. "Is everybody here...?Wait..where's Faust? "He was with me a moment ago.."Lyserg applied Suddently..they heard something that made their hair rise: "NOOOOO!HEEEEELPPPPP!LEAVE ME ALONE!NOOOOOO! "It's Faust!"Ren said..."But how did he get outside?" ......................................................................................... More capturing and mysterious adventures soon! |
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Post by Eliza on May 21, 2005 18:47:18 GMT -5
 Faust!!! NOOOO!!!! Good story sofar! MORE MORE MORE!
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Post by Sayoky on Jun 1, 2005 12:13:01 GMT -5
Ok..i know i haven't written for a long time!Yesterday i wrote almost all the chapter and just when I was about to finish...my computer shot down because it was raining and the power fell!!!I was so angry!  Anyway....here's my next chapter! *************************** They all ran outside to look for Faust..He kept yellling from somwhere behind some dark bushes.Rain started to fall slowly but with big drops. The group aproached the bushes with their hearts beating fast.Tey peerd over and saw something horrible...they could not bare the horrid image. Faust layed motionless on the cold wet ground...he was completely mutilated and blood was everywhere. "Oh my Lord...."Manta said,in a frightened voice. Tears flooded everybody's eyes,although it was raining hard and the tears mixed with the cold rain drops,you could tell they were all crying. "Haven't any of you realised something?"Lyserg asked,wiping away a tear. "Like what?"Ren answered sarcasticly. "Where is Eliza?" "Good point there,Lyserg!"Anna congradulated him "I DON'T CARE ABOUT HER!!!!ALL I WANT IS FOR HAO TO PAY!!!!PAY FOR FAUST'S DEATH!!!" "Calm down Yoh!we all want Hao to pay for this but first we have to think clear!"Anna tried to cheer him. "We shall give Faust a proper funeral,Ryu siad in a serious voice,Ren you digg a whole to barry him!" "Ok!"Ren agreed. They gave him a proper funeral but they still suffered a great loss although they didn't show it at all. "We'll spend the night here and tomorrow we'll see what we do..for now we have to rest!We've been through alot for today...tomorrow we shall see!"Anna said in a bossy voice. They listened to her(not that they had any choice) and went inside the cave.They fell asleep quiclky.The next day would be very hard and full of difficulties. |
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Eliza
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Post by Eliza on Jun 4, 2005 20:46:33 GMT -5
:'(Chpa... Chpa...?  F-Faust... Nyoooooo! *Sob sob sob sob* |
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Post by Sayoky on Jun 7, 2005 11:29:10 GMT -5
Sorry Eliza...somebody had to go first and Faust isn't really on my top ten favourite list...^_^
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Papaya-chan
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*singsong voice* I hate you ZoneAlarm, I hate you, I'll kill you! ^__^
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Post by Papaya-chan on Jun 10, 2005 0:16:32 GMT -5
*wails insanely* HOW DARE YOU!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! FAUUUUST! It's not true...*whimper* *sniffle* It's not true...*squeezes and chews the head of a Faust plushie* What did Faust ever do? ;~;
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Post by Sayoky on Jun 11, 2005 9:56:13 GMT -5
don't be sad!!!I'm starting to like Faust myself!!!
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Papaya-chan
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*singsong voice* I hate you ZoneAlarm, I hate you, I'll kill you! ^__^
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Post by Papaya-chan on Jun 12, 2005 17:53:00 GMT -5
T____T That's the second fic I've read where people killed Faust...It's not true...>__< Nyaaaa~ *takes his body and tries to learn Necromancy*
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Post by Sayoky on Jun 15, 2005 7:40:19 GMT -5
Papaya-chan and all of you who love Faust...i have a surprise for you!
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Yoh opened his eyes.The sun barely lighted the cold cave.He got to his feet and walked slowly twoards te cave exit.He could realise that it was not morning yet for the sun did not rise yet.
"Problems sleeping,Yoh?"
Ren was rubbing his eyes and walking lasyly twoards Yoh.
"Yeah...I wanted to get some fresh air and maybe some food..."Yoh answered while he was gazing far away with his site lost.
"Look Yoh..I know you're sad about Faust and all that but we can't stop here!We have to be more powerful than ever!We have to....ar you listening to me Yoh?"
"I hear you clearly Ren...al I want is to get that bastard..Hao...and kill him for what he has done!!"Yoh answered nervously
"That's what we all want"Ryu talked from behind them.
Everybody woke up,ate,took their bags and set off through th dark forest.They walked and walked,rarely stopping to relax or eat.
"I can't walk anymore!!!" HoroHoro complained
"Neither can I!"Manta bellowed"Can we stop for a moment,Anna?"
"NO!You lazy,idiot,cretins!!!!We are not stopping!NO!NO!NO!And I sugest you get up and start walking...or do you want me to make you walk my way?"Anna yelled at them
"N...no mam'" Manta and HoroHoro answered humiliated.
They kept walking...they could hear the birds sing from the high dark trees....and see the snakes crawl under their feet.
After hours and hours of walking,they finally reached a village.
"Hello!Anybody there?"Lyserg shouted.
The village looked deserted and spooky...
"We'll spend the night here!"Anna said
"Hey..sleeping without me?I thaught we were friends!"
They all turned to see who was talking..No!It couldn't be...but yet again..it could...Faust's ghost was floating in the air and waving to them...he was smilying to them..
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How 'bout that? ^.^
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IceDragon
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The stupidity all hail the stupidy *bows to self* I'VE DISCOVERED THE STUPIDITY!!
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Post by IceDragon on Jun 16, 2005 11:58:57 GMT -5
I loved your...*goe to count* fourth chappie! Nothing against Faust and all, I was a fangirl for a while in fact, but a nice, big, bloody, gutty death is just the way to get a story going!
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Post by Secretofmana on Jun 19, 2005 6:04:28 GMT -5
Wow! Neat plot twist of Faust ghost to turn things around! You're doing great so far on you lesser-humourous fanfic!
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*zombie like expressions* please?
Faust!!! NOOOO!!!! Good story sofar! MORE MORE MORE!
F-Faust... Nyoooooo! *Sob sob sob sob*
Hai guyz.