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Post by Shaman King Yoh Asakura on Jul 26, 2005 10:36:21 GMT -5
I like it so far. That and I've never joined the RP nor read it so this is quite better actually.
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Vasuki
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Post by Vasuki on Jul 26, 2005 12:14:46 GMT -5
Page 3. Don't worry, by page 4-5, things actually start to happen.  |
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Post by zinc on Jul 26, 2005 13:47:41 GMT -5
Zinc: I wonder what'll happen with me. What's a cameo?
Me: It's when you appear in a story, and... Well, considering it's you, most of the girls in the panel pounce on you.
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Post by Gus on Jul 26, 2005 18:00:07 GMT -5
RESCUED!
...or IS he!?
Heheh... Geo even has his own Anna... GOOD JOB!
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Post by Lovely on Jul 26, 2005 18:41:44 GMT -5
Would it be ok if I gave you some constructive criticism?
Basically, I like the comic so far. Your designs are unique and cute ^^. However, I found the last page you posted was a little confusing in panel layout.
'Sides that, good work Vas ^^ .
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Post by Vasuki on Jul 26, 2005 18:51:24 GMT -5
*nod* Thank you. ^_^ This isnt supposed to be anything serious, but constructive comments would be great, as they will help when I actually decide to DO something serious.
It would be wonderful if whenever I choose to end this, that improvement can be seen.
When looking at it from an observers perspective (hard to do when you create something) I see where and how the layout went wrong. I will keep this in mind.....
XD Page 4 later tonight. Lovely I will keep in mind what you said for page 5 and beyond, thank you!
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Post by Gus on Jul 26, 2005 18:51:56 GMT -5
Heheh... I also get confused. Every time I start reading, I automatically go right to left. It takes a few minutes to realize you're... one of us...
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Post by Vasuki on Jul 26, 2005 20:34:33 GMT -5
Page 4.  Probably only one Page tommorow, if at all, this one took some energy, depite how bad the non-detail panels look XD *laughs at "one of us"* |
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Post by Gus on Jul 26, 2005 20:39:48 GMT -5
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
...and you just left me there, too...
'Brilliant'!
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Post by Ashil on Jul 26, 2005 20:39:54 GMT -5
oo i love the last pannel.
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Post by Vasuki on Jul 28, 2005 12:59:54 GMT -5
 Heheh, >_> *surprise*? ;D Anyways, yah, this page sets some things up. Next one is just one of those full page panel deals, so, I don't know when it will be up. Here, I tried to play around with panel height, but it might have made things more confusing. *shrug* Well, I was just playing around with black and white here mostly XD It's kinda simple. And don't you love how the setting randomly changed from cliff to giant branch? XD |
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Post by Ashil on Jul 28, 2005 13:59:25 GMT -5
thats....so....hot! *fanboys*
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Post by Gus on Jul 28, 2005 14:15:29 GMT -5
Whaaaat?
Okay, this is just not fair!
How come I'M the only one upside down? And wait, is Syn wearing anything under those vines? And on that note... HOLY CRAP! Am I wearing anything under those vines!?
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Post by Ashil on Jul 28, 2005 14:33:39 GMT -5
lol @ gus lets all hope you have something on under that. as for syn....  |
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Post by Gus on Jul 28, 2005 14:42:30 GMT -5
What's THAT supposed to mean? I'll have you know I'm insanely beautiful!
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