Vasuki
Senior Shaman
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Post by Vasuki on Aug 6, 2005 19:20:39 GMT -5
Page 7  Not proud of this one very much. In fact, it was kinda rushed all around, and it shows... ^_^;;;; I have had a few things on my mind, so this might be the last one for a while. I do plan on doing more though, so no fears, although it will remain a test of different comic attributes. As the scene work and text sucked in page 7, that will probably be adressed in page 8. I mean, Lord T. kinda just randomly showed up there. I need to find a better way to portray a sudden entry.... *rambles to self* And as I want to practise fight scenes (which also ties into general scene work) pages 9 through 12 will likily be a fight. That's all... >_>;;; Also thank you all very much for your comments on page 6. ^_^. I am honestly flattered beyond belief. Although, that will be apparent in time.... |
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Post by Gus on Aug 6, 2005 20:03:17 GMT -5
...Well, I'm glad everyone cares so much about the guy tied up at the bottom of the page XD.
Heheh, badass page Vas. Awesome job on teh phoenix. And who IS that lady? And wait... WHERE is Mr. T?
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Post by RyuLover67 on Aug 8, 2005 21:33:03 GMT -5
So cool...I really want to read more.I really like your art work Vas so this is really cool.Plus the storyline is greta too. ;D
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Post by Sayoky on Aug 9, 2005 3:42:58 GMT -5
ZOMG!!This was super cool! Vasuki-sama keep posting or you will never see daylight again mwhahahaa....okay joking...nice job!Keep 'em coming!
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Vasuki
Senior Shaman
Posts: 422
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Post by Vasuki on Aug 10, 2005 18:43:55 GMT -5
Page 8  I know I said I wasn't gonna do this for a while, but it's just filler flashback...thingy........ Everything turned out pretty ok to me this time, except the last panel. Originally, Ali's gave was even more spaced out looking than it was now. I'm not so skilled with comp stuff, so, the editing was a challenge to even get it to look that good. But, I know it's something I have to work on now, eye contact and the like. Shouldn't be too hard to practise I imagine. "Present" plot starts again next page. Don't expect anything *that* serious though. If the image is too big. (made it bigger due to the text I wanted to add this time) Please let me know and I will simply replace the image with a link. Thank you. ^_^ |
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Post by Lovely on Aug 10, 2005 19:17:09 GMT -5
"I'm being ignored, aren't I?"
I LOVE that look on her face XD .
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Post by Gus on Aug 10, 2005 20:22:07 GMT -5
Sweet, man. Sorta confusing, but yer art pulls it through. And now...
Well, at least now Gus isn't the only one being ignored...
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Post by Jr. on Aug 14, 2005 15:04:49 GMT -5
Am I the only one that knows who this new character is?
It's LC's character!!!! XD It's not a woman! XD
Sorry to laugh.... I guess it is difficult since I have read about the fight Vas is flashbacking here! SO I had an idea who it was..
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Post by Lord Cyber on Aug 14, 2005 15:17:51 GMT -5
WOAH! I didn't even know this thing existed until Jr. told me just now...awesome work Vas! Kudos! Kudos!
LC
(mumbles something about practicing drawing this afternoon...)
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Post by Lovely on Aug 14, 2005 18:36:38 GMT -5
Am I the only one that knows who this new character is? *hits self* GA! "TEMPLAR KNIGHTS" and the overly-dramatic speeches! I KNEW it seemed familiar! I can't beleive I forgot! I can't beleive I forgot. *laughs* Soooo was thinking it was girl 'till you said something Jr XD . |
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Post by Gus on Aug 15, 2005 10:12:19 GMT -5
Yah, I thought it was a girl...
...till I asked Vas who 'that chick with the cape' was and he told me... >>;
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Post by Sayoky on Aug 16, 2005 8:28:16 GMT -5
Page 7 is my personal favourite..i dunno why...i just like it!!
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Post by Pinkechidna on Aug 17, 2005 16:58:05 GMT -5
Vas, these...........awesome....art.....entire manga series....
I am speechless! *bows to Vas*
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Vasuki
Senior Shaman
Posts: 422
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Post by Vasuki on Aug 19, 2005 14:55:35 GMT -5
Page 9  Please, no need to bow, uhm, no witty comment, sorry. Uhm, Next page starts the fight, which, I'm not gonna have last a very long time, because, well, fights are kinda boring to draw if you think about it. It won't be more than 3 or 4 pages in all likily hood. We'll see though. This page turned out odd.... *shrugs* I tried some new things with editing, came out weird. As for composition and the like, I think it's an ok job.... I can see improvement, so, I'm happy in that sense. Only thing I don't like is the word bubble placement in Ashil's panel. It's another bigger page, sorry Dial uppers. As for Gus, he's fine..... I think.... >_>;;;; |
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Post by Lovely on Aug 19, 2005 15:15:12 GMT -5
Y'know, your art style kind of reminds me of Tim Burtons. Y'know, the Nightmare Before Christmas style. That last shot of Ashil there really reminded me of it.
I like, I like.
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