Ankari
Senior Shaman
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Post by Ankari on Mar 14, 2006 0:42:37 GMT -5
I've been practicing some of my art.. and have found an eye style I like, even though its from fullmetal alchemist..  Rashina, my Hagaren OC... I quite like this picture.. even though it's kinda old..  Ed and Rashina.. I like this picture too... This ones not coloured by hand. oh gasp. |
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Post by StrawberryInuPie on Mar 14, 2006 3:02:26 GMT -5
I've seen these and commented on them before..o.o; Well..you've gotten better. I like the eyes in the first one. ^^ And the hair. Just..work on the body, proportions and all that stuff. Same with the second, it's nice, but looks a bit weird. I have trouble drawing more than one person in a picture, so it's probably better than I could do, but still um..it's tilted(but I know that happens sometimes. XD;) and something looks a bit strange. ^^; It's nice though. And it looks like you draw a good Ed~  You've gotten better. ♥~ |
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Post by Lobsterdeth on Mar 14, 2006 23:35:47 GMT -5
Holy shit awesome, the girl in the first pic has the same torso and arm width.
The second pic is leaning too much to the right.
You've improved.
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Ankari
Senior Shaman
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Post by Ankari on Mar 14, 2006 23:41:07 GMT -5
Holy shit awesome, the girl in the first pic has the same torso and arm width. The second pic is leaning too much to the right. You've improved.  GAH. I didnt notice that mistake. I know its leaning n_n;; I don't know if that's sarcasem or not.. |
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Alyssa-Chan
Shaman in Training
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Post by Alyssa-Chan on Mar 15, 2006 2:27:44 GMT -5
Sugoi, Anka-san! ^^
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Ankari
Senior Shaman
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Post by Ankari on Mar 15, 2006 15:29:02 GMT -5
...:gonk: I told you not to call me that. But thanks. |
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Rakira
Cute Newbie
In your dreams, evil spawn
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Post by Rakira on Mar 15, 2006 20:55:48 GMT -5
Yah, proportions need work. Coloring and clothes need improving, shading's a god, and the hair needs some movement, for a lack of way to say it. The lines seem jagged and harsh, especially around the face. Some things just seem crooked or unbalanced.
But then again, I probably shouldn't be saying anything. My art sucks.
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Alyssa-Chan
Shaman in Training
Alviss-Kun~! <3
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Post by Alyssa-Chan on Mar 17, 2006 1:32:06 GMT -5
...:gonk: I told you not to call me that. But thanks. Nuu. You told me not to call you Anka- chan xP You're welcome |
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Rakira
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In your dreams, evil spawn
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Post by Rakira on Mar 17, 2006 20:11:49 GMT -5
In the second pic, it look likes your OC charater can't support her own body weight. >.<
And Ed's expression is like, "Holy crap, how much do you weigh?"
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Ankari
Senior Shaman
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Post by Ankari on Mar 18, 2006 0:33:01 GMT -5
In the second pic, it look likes your OC charater can't support her own body weight. >.< And Ed's expression is like, "Holy crap, how much do you weigh?" yeah, I relised I curved her leg funny, and made it look like she was falling onto him. |
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Post by resurie on Mar 23, 2006 18:35:22 GMT -5
I must admit, you HAVE improved. Especially on your eyes. Though as others have said, just work a bit more on your proportions.
The second picture, as others have said, yeah, it's tilted, but the reason it may look weird is because you put the two too close together. Kind of looks like they've been fused. O.o
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GAH. I didnt notice that mistake.
