Post by Lord Cyber on Feb 28, 2005 21:26:14 GMT -5
The explosion was deafening.
20
All above her the sky had erupted into fire and glass.
19
Hao's soft grin was becoming a blur as she fell away from him.
18
She turned to see the man with 10 silver rings falling ahead of her...unconcious.
17
The rest of them fell like burning stars around her...they had underestimated Hao.
16
Tears streamed from her eyes and across her face as the ground came up to greet her.
15
She reached ahead of her, trying to catch the unconcious man.
14
Her fingers slipped at the smooth leather around his collar.
13
Stretching as far as she could, her fingers seemingly danced across the seams and stitches of his collar.
12
She tried to scream at him, but the wind took away her breath along with her tears.
11
She could make out the details of the street lamps below, and the parked cars.
10
His body was twisting away from her through the air.
9
A chain had come loose from under his shirt. Another silver ring shimmered and twisted on it.
8
She was able to catch the silvery band with her nail...
7
Curling her finger back, the ring slipped down from the cuticle to her skin.
6
She pulled on it hoping not to choke him after everything that had happened.
5
She fought against the very air itself to bring him into her arms.
4
The wind screamed it's displeasure at her, howling against her ears as she grabbed at him.
3
She fought once more with the wind inhaling sharply against it.
2
Her right arm clutched him tight against her as her left hand shot towards the ground holding nothing more than a small shattered mirror.
1
"REFLECTION!"
0
The sound of shredding metal and breaking windshield filled her ears as they hit the roof of the car. She didn't have enough Furyoku left to stop them...but she did have enough to make sure they would live.
20
All above her the sky had erupted into fire and glass.
19
Hao's soft grin was becoming a blur as she fell away from him.
18
She turned to see the man with 10 silver rings falling ahead of her...unconcious.
17
The rest of them fell like burning stars around her...they had underestimated Hao.
16
Tears streamed from her eyes and across her face as the ground came up to greet her.
15
She reached ahead of her, trying to catch the unconcious man.
14
Her fingers slipped at the smooth leather around his collar.
13
Stretching as far as she could, her fingers seemingly danced across the seams and stitches of his collar.
12
She tried to scream at him, but the wind took away her breath along with her tears.
11
She could make out the details of the street lamps below, and the parked cars.
10
His body was twisting away from her through the air.
9
A chain had come loose from under his shirt. Another silver ring shimmered and twisted on it.
8
She was able to catch the silvery band with her nail...
7
Curling her finger back, the ring slipped down from the cuticle to her skin.
6
She pulled on it hoping not to choke him after everything that had happened.
5
She fought against the very air itself to bring him into her arms.
4
The wind screamed it's displeasure at her, howling against her ears as she grabbed at him.
3
She fought once more with the wind inhaling sharply against it.
2
Her right arm clutched him tight against her as her left hand shot towards the ground holding nothing more than a small shattered mirror.
1
"REFLECTION!"
0
The sound of shredding metal and breaking windshield filled her ears as they hit the roof of the car. She didn't have enough Furyoku left to stop them...but she did have enough to make sure they would live.
Is there more?! I must know what happened! You're a really good writer LC! 
Hai guyz.