My scribblings...

[Innle]

Now organized in one post for your ease in viewing!

Semi-canon:

"within us like a rose..." Pre-series, Lyserg and his father. - skn.fusionxhost.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1335

"Summertime" - skn.fusionxhost.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1000

"In memoria tenebitur (WARNING CHARACTER DEATH)" (I'd just like to say that this has no connection to our reality whatsoever. Completely post-manga Mankinverse.) - skn.fusionxhost.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=974

"One more time before the end..." - skn.fusionxhost.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=277

Completely AU/Crossover-related
"Full Circle" - skn.fusionxhost.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1268

"Rice Wine and Angsting" - skn.fusionxhost.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1294

Give feedback here, any relevant notes will be posted with the story.

-Innle (craves feedback like a Homunculus craves Philosopher's Stones)

[Drave]

Ah, Ed (or should I call you Innle now?), you have the knack for supplying the reader with good mental imagery in your fanfiction..... I love that. Few authors can do so. I especially loved the first ("within us like a rose"); your characterization of Liam was very spot-on, and fics including mention of him at all are very rare.

Concrit, I have less of.... I enjoyed reading all of your stories, but the language in a few was enough to make even me cringe X3. I guess it's because the thought of characters (especially Lyserg, in the last) cursing so..... fluently seems foreign, to me... I have to say, you deliver the force intended in the conversations very well.

In short: This fandom needs more writings like you deliver.

[Innle]

I'm so glad you like my writing!!! And feel free to call me Ed, at least that's pronouceable....

Mya. I don't know quite what to say to the language thing, except that HE WAS DRUNK! ::blush:: (And I can swear rather fluently when the situation calls for it IRL....)

-Innledward