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Post by KuroiInu on Aug 19, 2005 11:45:19 GMT -5
It's great, Renna-sama!~ And I'm not just saying that to be nice. ^-^
It's not often that you find any good RenXOC fanfiction online, but this seems like a good start.
Yay~ Yukihiro-chan! ^-^ I'm so happy to finally be exposed to her character... I've been curious ever since that first post about her.
Write more soon!~
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Post by kfttjdb on Aug 19, 2005 12:22:48 GMT -5
What, you read it?*cough* I mean thank you very much for reviewing it. I was sure it sucked because I didn't take much time writing it and did no brainstorming. If I decide to make a story, this won't be the beginning and it may not go like this. Thank you again, Kuroinu.
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Post by Sayoky on Aug 19, 2005 12:37:47 GMT -5
Such an incredible story...but who is Yukihiro...and why does Ren act like that???He is being mean to her...>.<
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Post by kfttjdb on Aug 19, 2005 12:57:15 GMT -5
Wow thanks for reading, Sayoky. Yukihiro is a character that I made up. I think of her whenever I think of Ren. In this particular exerpt, he is being rude because he doesn't know how to act around her. They have sort of become friends and she likes him. (not romantically yet, I think) He picked up on this quickly and it's freaking him out because he doesn't know how he feels. I promise it will make more sense when I do some brainstorming!
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Post by wannabeeliza on Aug 19, 2005 22:27:04 GMT -5
i like it! i can tell if you counitne it wont end up as one of those clich'ed OC stories so i say counitnue on you valient queast!
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Post by Sayoky on Aug 20, 2005 12:26:56 GMT -5
Well Renna...there is nothing for you to thank me in reading the fanfic!Fanfics are made to be read and yours is a damn interesting one ^^!
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Post by kfttjdb on Aug 21, 2005 11:47:45 GMT -5
Thank you so much to all who participated in this experiment. I appreciate what was said in the posts; it's always good to get a second opinion on things to make sure you're not wasting your time. Since no one who has viewed or posted has said or voted negatively about the excerpt, I have decided to make a story. If you want to vote or comment on this excerpt please do so, I could use the constructive criticism. Thank you again.
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Mystic
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Post by Mystic on Aug 26, 2005 9:38:47 GMT -5
The story was great(especially cause it had Ren in it)! I'm glad you decided to write a fic! Please let us read it as soon as possible!  |
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Post by kfttjdb on Aug 26, 2005 15:08:47 GMT -5
Thank you very much Mystic. I want to get it 85% complete before I start my new job because I know I won't have all of this free time. We'll see. It's coming together so far. I guess I will post it when I'm done. (I wasn't going to) Thanks again for the kind words!
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