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Post by Sayoky on Aug 19, 2005 12:59:46 GMT -5
This is a fanfic based on the Inuyasha anime...yes..i am obsessed...now let's get started...
"It all ended faster than it had started...his mind was full of dark thughts and hate...he wanted revenge!He wanted to kill the one that took away his love....Inuyasha was depressed and angry...he wasn't thinking rational....though he could not move due to his serious injuries he still felt the hate and the sick desire of revenge.He was just lying there on the wet soil...blood covered most of his red suit...
Far away from that place...in another world,distant yers ahead...a girl named Kagome Higurashi woke up from her sleep...she looked around..it was dark outside...
-It's so early?!Oh...I had that same dream again..i don't understand..i keep dreaming that human..demon..and he looks injured...
She did not know that her dream was real...she took her shoes on and went outside for some air.As she was walking in the night,she heard a strange noise comming from the sacred well...she ran inside and saw that it was just a little bird stuck inside....When the bird saw her..it instantly dived twoards the well...
-Noooo!!!!!!!Kagome yelled and ran to the well....
When she was almost near the well,she tripped on something and fell directly ino the well...she yelled thinking tha she was going to die..but she did not..she reached another world...it was Feudal Japan"
That's it for this chapter....next one coming soon...now i have to go and watch Mega Man!
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Post by kfttjdb on Aug 19, 2005 20:44:52 GMT -5
Wait, I'm confused. Is Inuyasha the demon she dreamed about? I like it so far.
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Post by Sayoky on Aug 20, 2005 12:20:24 GMT -5
Yes...Inu is the demon Kagome dreamed of every night...i have to write some more but first i have to write them on a paper to put my ideeas in order!
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Post by Sayoky on Sept 1, 2005 7:31:32 GMT -5
So....snice there were no new posts and i have to go on with my fanfic....*rolls eyes* i'm going to post again...gomen....
" Kagome found herself laying on the wet grass....she slowly opened her eyes and saw that she was in what it seemed to be,the middle of a forest.
-I must be dreaming....yes that's it....
She got up,looked around and sighed.She wanted to get out of the forest....more than that she wanted to wake up from this wier dream.Kagome started walking fast to where her intuition took her...she felt like something was sort of dragging her through the thick forest,like a supranatural power. Though she had been walking for less than a half an hour,to her it seemed an eternity..but just when she was about ot give up,she saw it...the exit of the forest.She began to run though she felt pain in her ribs due to her tiredness.
-Finnaly...she said taking a deep breath and leaning against a tree with her eyes closed tight.
She was breathing hard and her heart was beating unusually fast....she had a feeling that she should not open her eyes....but she did...she opened her eyes...and she saw her dream in front of her.
Her eyes were full of tears....
-No..this isn't true...i'm dreaming!I have to be dreaming and i'll wake up and everything will be just fine....everything will be fine..."she spoke with fear in her voice
She pinched herself..and it hurt..."No...no...thi...this is impossible" she said to herslef....right in front of her,on the wet ground,the demon she had dreamed every night was now lying still and breathing slowly.Kagome knew she had to go to him....slowly,she kneeled in front of him then leaned forward to see his face.....
-Wh..who are you,the demon asked...Kikyou.....get away from me you..you foul woman..i hate you...you killed me...I hate you....
-I am not Kikyou....kagome answered him....my name is Kagome Kigurashi and i'm lost...can you help me please?
-Kagome?You are Kagome?I am sorry...i thaught you were Kikyou...could you please get that little bag...he pointed to a small leather bag at the bottom of the tree where Kagome rested.
-Yes...you look injured...Kagome said then she went running and got the little bag.Inside it,she found a small red bottle...she gave it to Inuyasha and he drank it....
Coming soon...my next chapter.....^^
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Post by kfttjdb on Sept 1, 2005 7:47:45 GMT -5
First off, I'm not saying this just because I like you. (and I happen to) I like this story. It has an enchanted forest theme to it. *bricked* Anyway I have a couple of questions:
1. The discovery of Inuyasha in the forest: is this part of Kagome's dream? Or did she have a dream about him and then discover him in the forest? And does she know who he is when she sees him?
2. Who is Kikyou?
Sayoky: *throws a brick at Renna J* "If you would just shut up and pay attention you would find out soon enough! Just read it! Good grief!"
By the way, people are reading it, they are just not posting. Keep writing it though. That's no reason to stop. ;D
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Post by Sayoky on Sept 1, 2005 10:08:20 GMT -5
Awww....thankies..now..i shall answer your questions:
1.Kagome keeps dreaming Inuyasha every night but she doesn't know who he is...then she falls into the well that takes her to Feudal Japan but she thinks it's a dream...but it's not...and she finds Inu there in the forest...she does not know who he is but she knows him from her dream.
2.If you watch the anime "Inuyasha" you will see who is Kikyou...actually...in the anime and manga Inu does not hate her....he loves her...But i hate that b***h so i'll make him hate here in my story....XD
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Post by kfttjdb on Sept 1, 2005 10:31:49 GMT -5
Yes, see I've never seen Inuyasha. *shot and burned*
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Post by Sayoky on Sept 3, 2005 10:13:27 GMT -5
Nah...maybe you will get to see Inyasha...someday...XD now to continue....
"After drinking the whole bottle,Inuyasha's wounds seemed to be healing by themselves.Kagome looked astonished at the way Inuyasha was starting to be much more powerful with every second.
-Tell me again,he said,who are you and what are you doing here in Feudal Japan?You don't look like being from here,he said looking at Kagome's pijama.
-Feudal Japan?!!You must be joking...i mean...how can it be?All i remember is that i fell into the well at my home and now i'm in Feudal Japan!!
-So...you came here through the Sacred Well...interesting...you must be from the future...I understand now,please let me introduce myself,I am Inuaysha, and i'm a...a...a half demon,he said that with disgust.
-Kagome Higurashi and i'm a..a human? She said and extended her hand in order to shake Inuyasha's...
He looked wierd at her and he did not understand why she was shaking his hand....just as thing got cooler,they heard movement rom the bushes.
-Who's there? Inuyasha asked in a fierce voice,Come out from there you coward or i swear i will inflict pain upon you!
-Calm down you imbecile!!It's me...where have you been all day...i have been worried sick!Oh..the strange guy said looking at Kagome...hello...who are you?
The man was tall and had a purple robe on him.His hair was dark and tied into a ponytail.He had earrings and he was rather sweet,holdin a staff into his right hand.
-Um..hello...i am Kagome..Kagome Higurashi..and..
-Don't tell me...you came from the well,right?I don't mean to frighten you,he said seing the look on Kagome's face,I overheard it ..anyway,my name is Miroku!
After they all knew eachother,Miroku and Inuyasha decided to invite Kagome over for some breakfast,she looked hungry and still shocked.
They reached a nice old-style japaneese house on the top of a hill.The wiew was beautiful and relaxing and the little house was just what could have made the scenerey more beautiful than it already was.As they stepped into the house,a pretty young wouman was waiting for them at the table.Her hair was tied into a high poneytail and she was waring a gorgeous kimono.
-Where was he again?Fighting,huh?...Oh..hello...the woman said
-Hello...i'm Kagome Higurashi..she replied
-She came from the Sacred Well,Miroku told her and winked.
-You do that one mor time Miroku and i swear to God i will shove that staff up your..ehem..pardon me...My name is Sango,she said calming her voice.
They all sat down to eat and Miroku started telling stories to show off in front of Sango and Kagome...everyone was full of joy that day..everyone except Inuyasha..he barely touched his food and he felt rather miserable and depressed.
Night came quick and everyone set off to bed.Inuyasha didn't want to sleep,he stood outside on the porch and watched the stars.
-Beautiful...Kagome said from his back,approaching him slowy.
-Aren't you sleeping,Inuyasha asked in a "leave me alone" voice
-No..not really,look,i saw you were upset all day long..will you tell me why?
-It's none of your bussines..leave me alone!!!He yelled and left Kagome there alone...."
I COMMAND YOU TO READ!!!!XD joking..^^
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Post by kfttjdb on Sept 3, 2005 15:12:58 GMT -5
oooo, Suspense... Keep going.
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Post by Sayoky on Sept 4, 2005 10:35:33 GMT -5
^^ thankies...i will........
"The next day Kagome woke up in suspans.
-Oh no!!!!I completly forgot about mom and grandpa!!!!And school....oh no..
-Calm down,Sanfo said bringing her a bowl of hot rice....here,eat!
-Thank you.......Kagome said
Everyone seemed to be very quiet that morning,especially Inuyasha.He seemed even more miserable than the day before.
-Are you going to stay like that all day?Miroku asked him sarcasticly...It was her,wasn't it?
-You better keep your mout shut Miroku or....
-Or what?Are you going to keep this hate forever??Let it go!She's dead now!
-I don't care,Inuyasha said with a desgusted voice.
Sango looked at Kagome who seemed to not understand what they were talking about.
-Kagome-chan,what do you say if i take you to the well?Sango said.
It was too much for Kagome to hear how Miroku and Inuyasha argued.She agreed and though she wanted to go home,she didn't feel like leaving.
As they were on their way to the well,Kagome decided she wanted to return to Feudal Japan...maybe forever...she felt some kind of connection with Inuyasha...Though she might hate her,she decided to take the risk and come back.
"I won't tell Sango yet"...she said to herself
They finally reached the well and Kagome said goodbye to Sango and jumped into the well,full of sorrow.
When she reached her room,she found her mother,brother and grandfather at the table,as calm as always.She was confuse.How could they have not notied her absence???How?
-Oh,hello Kagome?How was your day?
-Umm...fine?!
-So tell me my child,he grandpa began,how was Feudal Japan?
Kagome freaked out this time...she was staring at her grandfather.....
-H...how do you know...??
-Oh my darling....how could i not know....your destiny lies within Feudal Japan...that's why you feel like going back.I know you did not come back to stay,you just came to take some clothesa and leave again.
How could he know what she was thinking?But it did not matter...better that they knew.
-Mom..can i?
-If you feel that's the right thing to do....of course.
Kagome was happier than ever...she was going to see him again...soon.
So this is it..more of it comming soon ^^
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Post by kfttjdb on Sept 4, 2005 23:40:35 GMT -5
How is she going to get back there?
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Post by wannabeeliza on Sept 5, 2005 0:42:40 GMT -5
W00000T !! keep it going! the only hting that bugs me is how you have it presented...
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Post by Sayoky on Sept 5, 2005 2:42:05 GMT -5
yep...that bugs me too...v_v sorry....and Renna....Kagome is going to get back there the same way she got thare in the first place...through the well.^^
Off topic: Renna-chan,are you still mad at me?
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Post by kfttjdb on Sept 8, 2005 19:46:45 GMT -5
Off topic: I don't know what you're talking about so I'm gonna say no.
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Post by Sayoky on Sept 18, 2005 9:31:30 GMT -5
^^ okay...i am grounded so i dunno if i'll be able to write more...but here's the next part written at my local internet caffe *sigh*
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Kagome took a huge bag and stuffed it with loads of modern things like: a hairdrier,some towels,canned food and other things she considered necesary for her "trip".
She took some clothes too and said goodbye to her family.It was sad but inside she felt happy because she knew that she will see Inuyasha again.
Arriving in Feudal Japan (through the well) she remembered the way back to the little house where she met Sango.As she was walking on the path, she saw him.Her heart pounded fast and she felt like she was going to scream of joy. But all she could do was stay there and look at him. His long silver, his beautiful golden eyes made Kagome float in the seven skies of love.
He walked slowly twoards her.
"You came back....I am sorry for yelling at you that night.I felt so much anger inside that i had to throw it out.I was betraded in such a manner that i could trust noone,but i don't know how....you made me feel happy for the first time in years." He said when he reached her.
Kagome blushed and looked deep into his eyes.
"You needn't be sorry. It was my fault i was so pushy. Anyway. Where is Miroku and Sango?"
"They are back at the house. They told me to go to the well and wait for you because you were going to come back."
She felt like everything was just a beautiful dream and just when she thaught i coudn't get better, Inyasha grabbed her hand and pulled hertwoards him.
"Let's go,shall we? They are waiting for us.." Inuyasha said.
Kagome and Inuyasha looked like two people in love.And maybe that was what they were.But they never imagined what things will happen to them....
This is all i could write...gomen......i will write more after i am not grounded...*rolls eyes*
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