Coming back

[kerry]

Hey,guys!So I was reading your stories,so I though I start writing one myself(hope it won't turn out to be TOO boring!)

I was thinking about this being something like episode 65 for the anime(I haven't seen the manga,so please don't be mad at my mistakes:)

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The night was warm.Everything seemed so pieceful until you looked up at the stars.The sky looked like an endless black hole,a hole in which your mind gets lost forever...The stars were shining bright,brighter then usuall.If Yoh had just looked up that night he'd probably know-but he didn't look up.For the first time he didn't look at the stars,so he didn't see them,he didn't hear them scream,he didn't hear them warning him.Now he was in his bed sleeping...

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The stars didn't dare shining so bright there.The moon had shown it's whole face and was staring at this forgoten by people and spirits place.This place was holy..once!But now the king of spririts was somewhere else,a place noone knew!The big columns were throwing shadows in the endless abyss.Forgoten...Forgoten..That's what this place was screaming.
Forgoten...But not by everyone.

A short boy with african hair was standing on the edge of the abyss.
"Master Zeke...Master..."
Tears were rolling down his cheeks.He was crying.The moon light reached him and got lost in the black hole...Like it was swollowed..
"Master...I'm sorry master,please come back!I never doubt your powers...I know you're not gone..Master Zeke..."
'Hwish'-a little rock fell down.But there was no sound.Like every living feeling,sound and power had fallen silent.The boy looked down.Something was moving...What?
One hand showed up and cought the edge of the abyss.


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"Zeke....!"-he whispered...
He opened his eyes and stared at the cieling.He was terrifide.Sweat was covering his face.He sat up in the bed and felt it hard to breathe.He put his hand on his chest.His heart was going explode.He just stared at his feet and gave all his power to keep brething.This wasn't happening,wasn't happening...He touched his face.Yes,it was still him-Yoh Asakura.
Yoh Asakura...But what had waken him up wasn't carrying that name...At least the first part...


Well that was part 1 and soon I hope I'll write part 2.

[kerry]

Yoh got up from the bed.He went infront of the mirror and stared at his reflection.He was still terrified from what he saw.His finger slowly ran down the boy looking at him from the mirror.The cold glass felt like ice...Ice...That's what he needed.He opened his eyes wide-like waking up from the trance he had fallen into.He leaned his elbows on the table and took his head in his hands.What was this?!What was going on?!!Was it dream...Reality?An aweful nightmare or a real thing?!!What...It was still hard for him to breathe.He got out of the room and looked around.Everything was dark,but Anna's bedroom door was open.Yoh leaned on the wall and took a peak into her room.She was sleeping piecefully,probably having no idea...She turned around in her dream and Yoh saw her face.Her hair was gently falling on her face...The sheet had sliped down..She looked so...Yoh turned around and opened to roof door.Once he was up on the roof he sat down.He took a deep breathe,but his body still refused to exept and air.He puched himself hard in the chest.It helped-he was able to breathe again.His hands were still shivering...It wasn't what he saw...It was what he felt.Something had crabed him and was pulling him...Into the black hole...Did all this really happend?!Was Opacho really there...Suddenly Yoh heared a sound behind him.He turned around fast.It was Anna...She was standing infront of him.She had forgot to put her robe on and was only wearing a short nighty.One of her shoulder-straps gently fell down her shoulder.The moon litted her body and the warm wind was playing with her hair.Yoh couldn't take his eyes off of her.He had never really realized how..How beautiful she was!She gave him a little smile and then sat down next to him.
"Bad dream?"-she asked and looked up at him.
They needed only a glance to know eachothers feelings and thoughts,so Yoh didn't look back at her.
"Just needed some fresh air,that's it!Don't worry."-he said still staring at the moon.
Suddenly he realized...The moon was full!!!Just like in the dream!
Anna wasn't stuped.She knew something was bothering Yoh.She took his hand.
"It's cold"-she said.
Yoh took his robe of and putted around her shoulders.She did that on perpose-she made him turne around so she could meet his eyes.And she saw it...Yoh looked back up at the moon.
"Yoh..."-she put her finger on his chin and moved his head torwards her.-"What's wrong?!"
He bought his lips.She had no idea!She just didn't know how scared he was.If what he saw was real...What was going to happen with Len,Trey,Ryu,Morty...What was going to happen with...Her?
"He's back"-Yoh whispered.
"Are you sure?"-she asked.She wasn't sure what he said was the truth.It just couldn't be...
"Probably it's just your imagination!I mean you've been through all that stuff latly!"-she tried,but...
Yoh glared at her.That looked scared her.For a second she though he looked like...
"You don't understand Anna!"-he looked down at his feet.-I didn't just saw it!I felt it!Like I was there...Like I was...Him!

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He reached his other hand up and pushed himself up...It was hard for him to breath.3 days seemed like...3 ages!The short boy stared at him.
"Master...Is that you?"-fear could be felt from his voice.
The boy who standed infront of him was topless and his pants were all teared up.He still had his Oracle Bell and gloves on.The moon had lit him with her silver light,but his face was in a shadow.The short boy was watching terrified,but the other boy didn't seem to notice him.On his dark face showed and evil smile.Then he started laughing.And then...His hands started burning!!!Pure fire...Was covering his whole hands...He looked up.His eyes were shining...Like the deepest part of hell had just woke up...
"Master Zeke..."-The short boy asked shivering.
"I'm coming for you-Zeke said-YOH!!!
The spirit of fire rised behind him more powerfull then ever....

[Sayoky]

OMFG!! This is extraordinary!!! I love it!!! It's absolutely brilliant, kerry! The revenge of Hao....great job!! I'm waiting for the next chapter ^_^