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Post by Sayoky on Apr 9, 2005 5:43:47 GMT -5
Gosh!Thanks for all your concerns about my grammar mistakes!I'll watch out for them!
Till then wait for the next chapter of the story,chapter 4!
And by the way!I was kind of sleepy when I wrote chapter 3! ::)God!What's wrong with my Pc?It keeps getting blocked!I hate it!
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Post by AnimeFanatic on Apr 9, 2005 6:04:10 GMT -5
You made 4 mistakes in the first chapter, and 7 in the second. And you made 7 in your most recent post, just before this one.
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 9, 2005 6:22:54 GMT -5
Would u please stop correcting my chapters?It's really annoying!
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Post by Secretofmana on Apr 9, 2005 8:52:18 GMT -5
Yeah, I know! Ease up, AnimeFanatic! Sure, maybe her spelling could use some work, but that doesn't mean you have to be a jerk! (That rhymed!)
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Post by AnimeFanatic on Apr 9, 2005 9:07:28 GMT -5
Ehem... But I can see around your mistakes, so it doesn't matter much to me, I'm just saying. Yeah...I'm not trying to be a jerk about it. I'm just saying. I'll shut up about your mistakes now. |
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Post by Secretofmana on Apr 9, 2005 9:19:10 GMT -5
Good, because if you hadn't, I would have gone and teased you about how you misspelled "tyring"(trying)!  Kidding,kidding........ |
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TheRogue
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NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
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Post by TheRogue on Apr 9, 2005 12:17:06 GMT -5
OK I really have to say something here:
1. Sayoky is forign so I don't know about you guys but I think it's no crime for her to misspell... you on the other hand use English everyday in writing so I hope you get my point...
2. She has some very important exams coming up so practically she does have a whole lot to learn ...even if she's 14
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 10, 2005 4:23:54 GMT -5
Gee!You're sweet TheRogue!I'm gonna have to thank you on Monday!But now i'll start writing chapter 4!
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 10, 2005 4:39:25 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Anna's house...
Ren:Well,let's go!What are you waiting for?
HoroHoro:Ummmm...nothing.Come on!
They stepped into the house and found Morty/Manta cooking as usuall and Amida Maru washing the toilets.
Ren:Anna!are you home?
No answer...
HoroHoro:Let's go!She isn't home.
Morty:Hello guys!if you're looking for Anna,you might want to know this first!You won't believe it!
Ren:What?What's not to believe?
Morty:You remember that Yoh has to marry Anna,don't you?
HoroHoro:Yes!We do!But what's that got to do with....
Morty:Listen,said Morty laughing,they're about to get married any minute now!
Ren & HoroHoro:What????Where?
Morty:Well...I think,at Yoh's grandfather's house but...
Ren and HoroHoro started to run like wild twoards the wedding place...
Want to know more?Wait fore chapter 5!
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 10, 2005 4:42:19 GMT -5
OK I really have to say something here: 1. Sayoky is forign so I don't know about you guys but I think it's no crime for her to misspell... you on the other hand use English everyday in writing so I hope you get my point... 2. She has some very important exams coming up so practically she does have a whole lot to learn ...even if she's 14 Thanks!I apreciate it! |
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 10, 2005 4:44:26 GMT -5
Uuuu!I reallllly have to think of something cool to happen in the next chapter!Oh and a big THANKS to AnimeFanatic who has finally stopped to act like my grammar teacher! |
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Mystic
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Save the Earth! It's the only planet on which there is chocolate! :P
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Post by Mystic on Apr 10, 2005 5:20:40 GMT -5
I'm 16, I'm a junior in high school, which unquestionably makes me much busier than a 14 year old. Yet, I still find time to make my stories longer than a paragraph most of the time AND have less than 20 errors per paragraph... Let's not compare Roumanian schools with American ones. I know Roumanian kids that went to America and said that the same things you do there we did 3 or 4 years before! The same thing with Spain and as I was in England.......that's ever worse! AS for her errors.......not all Roumanian kids don't know how to spell in English!!! To Sayoky:1. You don't have an English grammar teacher, your not yet in highschool(I have 3....4 if you count my private lesson's teacher).....you've only got one teacher...TECHER(don't get the joke if you don't know her)!!! ;D 2.Get Ren and Pilika together!! P.S. Anime Fanatic is not acting like your grammar teacher anymore 'cause he can't ;D......he was banned!! |
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TheRogue
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NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
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Post by TheRogue on Apr 10, 2005 9:45:13 GMT -5
You're welcome, Sayoky but please try not to double/triple/quadruple(speaking about misspelling ) post or you'll end up like AnimeFanatic... Back on topic... MARRY?! I thought you said they were just going to... never mind.... |
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Post by Sayoky on Apr 10, 2005 10:11:38 GMT -5
well...what can I say!That was the original ideea but i changed my mind so this is the new and improved chapter.And to Mystic or whatever....I was only jokin aboout that part with grammar teacher!Chill out! ;D
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Post by Hana on Apr 10, 2005 11:21:10 GMT -5
Let's not compare Roumanian schools with American ones. I know Roumanian kids that went to America and said that the same things you do there we did 3 or 4 years before! The same thing with Spain and as I was in England.......that's ever worse! AS for her errors.......not all Roumanian kids don't know how to spell in English!!! I apologize. I had no idea Sayoky was Roumanian, although I'm not sure if the grammar rules for this site are relaxed for foreigners (resurie's from Nicaragua). So ya, I guess I should rephrase myself. I'm unquestionably busier than almost every 14 year old American. There. |
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