AF
Full Fledged Shaman
If you stare long enough, you'll see a giraffe.
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Post by AF on May 13, 2005 14:45:08 GMT -5
Well,Mystic,this ain't the last chapter so get used to the ideea that there are about 5 more chapters! ...That people like me are still waiting for... |
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Post by Sayoky on May 15, 2005 2:55:41 GMT -5
Without further ado......
Chapter 8
HoroHoro:Are you going to stay there all day?
Ren: Oh,sorry HoroHoro!Aaaamm,what were you saying?
It was obvious.....Ren and Pirika had fallen in love.
HoroHoro:I know!You don't have to be ashamed of it!
Ren: (confused)What are you taliking about?
HoroHoro:You like Pirika and she likes you,don't you Pirika?
They both blushed and said nothing.Minutes of silence passed like eternal hours.You would have tahught that each one waited for the other to speak first.After moments of deadly silence,Ren spoke:
Ren: Okay!I like Pirika.......so?(He blushed again)
Pirika:Ummm.......I like you too Ren.(She blushed too)
HoroHoro:Then what's to stop you?Go on!Ren,why don't you and Pirika go for a nice walk in the park?I'm sure you have lots to tell eachother...
Ren agreed and left the hotel room holding Pirika's hand.
HoroHoro felt happy for the first time that day and since he had nothing better to do,he thaught of going to Yoh's house and maybe even apologize for what had happened.....
Wow!Now i have to think of chapter 9!!Uuuu!I wonder what to put in the next chapter....oh well...we'll see then!
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TheRogue
Senior Shaman
NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
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Post by TheRogue on May 16, 2005 6:34:12 GMT -5
I know what would make your story more interesting  ... and if she holds her promise you other folks will find out too... |
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AF
Full Fledged Shaman
If you stare long enough, you'll see a giraffe.
Posts: 220
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Post by AF on May 16, 2005 22:30:48 GMT -5
THIS IS AWESOME! Keep 'em comming, please...I actually voted for RenXPirika in the Ren's mate thread...or whatever.
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Post by Sayoky on May 17, 2005 7:12:30 GMT -5
Awww...thanks CR42Y4NIM3FR34K(or sth like that  ) and as a bonus for ya all (since you've been so good 2 me) I'm gonna delight you with my next chapter...now... Chapter 9 HoroHoro was walking face down...outside was choky and hot.He finally reached Yoh's house and rang the door bell....No answer....He opened the door and led himself down the stone path. HoroHoro:Anybody home? No answer..... He went and sat down on the porch.He kept thinking at Annna.Then,out of the blue,a hand reached twoards him and tapped him gently on the shoulder.HoroHoro turned and saw that it was just Tamao. HoroHoro: Oh,hello Tamao!I'm sorry...there was no answer so.... Tamao:It's ok!You don't have to give me any explanation! HoroHoro:Would you mind staying here with me? Tamao:Sure!I'd love to.... She sat down by HoroHoro.They both said nothing for whole minutes until they looked at eachother...HoroHoro had never before realised what beautiful eyes Tamao had.And Tamao never realised how cute HoroHoro was. HoroHoro:Ummm.....do you want to....errr...go..err...out with.....ummm....me? Tamao blushed and said: Tamao:Ummm...sure HoroHoro... They both got to their feet and held hands and walked slowly twoards the city like a couple of lovers... Stay tuned 4 chapter 10 of confusing love... ;D |
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AF
Full Fledged Shaman
If you stare long enough, you'll see a giraffe.
Posts: 220
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Post by AF on May 17, 2005 9:35:48 GMT -5
You spelled my name right.
I like where this is going...
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TheRogue
Senior Shaman
NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
Posts: 263
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Post by TheRogue on May 17, 2005 12:05:12 GMT -5
Will you get to the *cough* good *cough* part already?  |
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Post by Secretofmana on May 17, 2005 17:46:25 GMT -5
This is cool! Akwardness in love of Mankin characters! ;D
Keep up the great work!
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Post by Sayoky on May 18, 2005 12:15:35 GMT -5
^.^ Me likey compliments *caugh*...jokin...now let's get to some writing!
Chapter 10
Everybody was happy and in love now.Yoh and Anna got married once again but this time along with Ren&Pirika and HoroHoro&Tamao.All three couples loooked wonderful together...
The party was amazing and everyone was invited.Including Faust,Ryu and his friends,Manta of course,Lyserg,TheRogue and as you expected...ME.
The cake was ever so good and the food was absolutely delicious.
Everyone was having fun and they all danced but they had no ideea that somebody,an uninvited guest,will ruin tha party.
BOOM!The doors hit tha walls...somebody stepped inside..it was Hao.
Hao:What a nice party...i didn't knew i was invited too!
Yoh:What do you want Hao!Why did you come here?
Hao:Relax lil' bro!I like to torture you!
TheRogue:You heard Yoh!What are you doing here?
Hao looked at her with great interest.
Sayoky:What do you want?Haven't you done enough?Hey!Are you listening to me?
But Hao wasn't listening to Sayoky...he was too busy staring at TheRogue..
Hao:I apologize..I don't know what has gotten into me...Ummm...you are TheRogue,aren't you?
TheRogue:yes...perhaps I am...
Hao:I was wondering if you want to err....go out with me?
TheRogue blushed a bit and then she said
TheRogue:Ummm...sure...but no fats in my food ok?
Hao:Whatever you say my Queen!
They both left the party room with everybody staring at them.
It seems that evil has found it's match...love!
Well TheRogue,now I kept my promise to you! ;D
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TheRogue
Senior Shaman
NO!! You can't make me go back there!!!
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Post by TheRogue on May 19, 2005 6:47:06 GMT -5
Lol, that sounds like me alright |
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Mystic
Senior Shaman
Save the Earth! It's the only planet on which there is chocolate! :P
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Post by Mystic on May 19, 2005 14:50:42 GMT -5
Lol, that sounds like me alright Of, of! Mai, mai! Now then you she is involved I should keep an eye on her! ;D...Not that I don't thrust her but....well....actually because of that!! |
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Post by Sayoky on May 20, 2005 6:40:20 GMT -5
LOL,Miruna!You're funny but Cory can look after herself as yoy will find ind in this last chapter of my... :'(story..*sniff*,*sniff*I just can't stand the pressure....  Chapter 11 This is the last chapter and the ending of this love story...As I said,Yoh and Anna lived happily ever after and had 8 children,all of them trained to become shamans.Ren and Pirika went to live somwhere in Africa,and had 6 children and all of them grew to be great shamans. HoroHoro and Tamao had 4 children themselves.They bought a big house in Tokyo and lived there happily ever after. TheRogue and Hao lived happily ever after too but they had no children because they discovered the magical condon ;D THE END!!!!!!!! Oh I just love happy endings.......... |
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AF
Full Fledged Shaman
If you stare long enough, you'll see a giraffe.
Posts: 220
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Post by AF on May 20, 2005 20:43:01 GMT -5
TheRogue and Hao lived happily ever after too but they had no children because they discovered the magical condon ;D EHEM: I'm pretty sure it's spelled "condom", but I know it isn't spelled with 2 Ns. It's a pretty good story. In my entire life, I never would've seen TheRogueXHao comming...ever...>.>... |
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Post by Sayoky on May 21, 2005 2:12:30 GMT -5
*Oh well....we ain't all perfect,you know!Anyway,I 'm ever so sad that my story is over... *sniff,sniff* |
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Post by Secretofmana on May 21, 2005 6:13:35 GMT -5
AF.......We already went over this once, STOP CORRECTING HER!  ..But anyways, It's a very good story! The chapters aren't long, it's funny, and it's simple! Great job Sayoky on your first fanfic! (starts the clapping/round of applause) |
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) and as a bonus for ya all (since you've been so good 2 me) I'm gonna delight you with my next chapter...now...
